Not ennui nor despair
Not hope nor loss
No excuse, no pleas
Just a little submission
For understanding
One who still is confused
And who wishes to say
“Alvida”
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6 responses so far ↓
nrsl // July 2, 2008 at 9:48 am |
Confused or confounded..
Alvida is needed to meet again..
Rambler // July 2, 2008 at 4:56 pm |
“Just a little submission”
so can the submission ever be a little?? looks like an oxymoron to me
chandni // July 3, 2008 at 5:44 am |
not from the blogworld I hope??:(
rebecca // July 3, 2008 at 10:51 pm |
to become untethered, huh? “ennui” is one of my favorite english words – don’t know why, like the sound of it, the spelling of it…yet a killer if we succumb to it!
i liked this poem very much…there was a quiet desperation of wanting to be let go.
chennairamblings // July 7, 2008 at 5:01 am |
@NRSL
Hmm
@Rambler
No no, not an oxymoron
You see, the addition of the “little” there is to make this sound like a humble thing I am doing
@Chandni
Nope, not yet at least
Thanks for dropping in
@Rebecca
I love the word too.
And yes, a killer that is merciless, I have seen so many people fall to it
Thank You
Sathish // July 26, 2008 at 12:12 pm |
mmmmmmmm…..